I was so happy to discover a new fantasy release at my local library–that’s rare!
As writers, we hear all the time that we’ve got to hook readers in just the first few pages or else. We’ve got to hook agents in the first few pages or else.
Whether you’re looking to get published or just hoping to hook your reader, first impressions are vital. Compelling opening scenes are the key to catching an agent or editor’s attention, and are crucial for keeping your reader engaged.
JEFF GERKE, THE FIRST FIFTY PAGES
Well then, let’s study those first few pages in other people’s stories, shall we?
Today I snagged from the New Release shelf:
Ink Blood Sister Scribe by Emma Törzs
I don’t like grabbing hyped books by big news book clubs, but I can see why folks dig Törzs’ Ink Blood Sister Scribe.
The prose is very descriptive and balanced between action and reflection. The dialogue feels a little awkward at times, but the characterization carries it through, especially when you have such a compelling family dynamic. How could a book kill the father? Why did one sister have to run away but not the other? Is the mother really dead? Because if she is, why must one daughter “never let her in”? I may not be a fan of prologues, but using the prologue to establish the death of the father from one sister’s perspective then allows the first chapter to focus on the other sister, allowing her to not only establish the passage of time and her unique life choices, but the mystery in conflicting details about the mother. If you’re keen on a contemporary fantasy with a bit of danger and family drama, then I’m sure Törzs’ will meet your needs.
No matter what the season brings, keep reading!
Read on, share on, and write on, my friends!
