Thanks to the wonders of modern technology [Zoom] I was able to chat with the Secret Poets this week. It was a tonic to talk poetry for a couple of hours.
With their help I was able to revise a number of poems including the one from the last post.
Hopefully it is clear. There was some discussion as to whether people would know that there are Victorian dinosaur sculptures in the park. I am trusting the erudition of my audience.
The other change is the layout which allows the poem to breathe.
This is a new poem, hopefully self-explanatory.
The photographs are all from Deal Fun Fair a number of years ago.
I’ve been listening to Graham Nash a lot recently. I think it started because I’d read Pete Doggert’s book about CSNY.
Here’s This Path Tonight.
Until next time.