Wren 5 early edits – 2020 Writing Week 46

This last week has been consumed with editing Wren 5 Firestorm. In the first half of the week I worked on the final few chapters which I’d blitzed out in a rush. I had been worried they wouldn’t be so hot, would need a lot of reworking, but they were pretty solid. The latter half of the week I started from the beginning. This is the heavy draft, for the deepest ‘ironing’ out of plot wrinkles. One thing I’m finding with all these books, I hit tangles around chapter 8. It’s the point where the opening fight is over, and …